I found the article very informative. Some parts could have been structured differently to avoid using the word "however" at the beginning of a sentence. Whenever I see that word, I am reminded that many folks constantly use that word with great force before making a statement in contrast to a previous statement. Even though some folks use that word with less force than others while beginning a sentence or contrasting parts of a sentence, I would use that only when telling someone they may do some activity in any manner they want.
@hydeks
I don't take pleasure in how Sony entered the video game market without the help of Nintendo. Also I would not use references to rude gestures (such as pointing with the middle digit of a human hand) either.
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Re: Guide: Crash Bandicoot N. Sane Trilogy Tips and Tricks for When Your Ass Is Getting Kicked
Why was this article given a vulgar title?
Re: Feature: The Making Of The Sony PlayStation
I found the article very informative. Some parts could have been structured differently to avoid using the word "however" at the beginning of a sentence. Whenever I see that word, I am reminded that many folks constantly use that word with great force before making a statement in contrast to a previous statement. Even though some folks use that word with less force than others while beginning a sentence or contrasting parts of a sentence, I would use that only when telling someone they may do some activity in any manner they want.
@hydeks
I don't take pleasure in how Sony entered the video game market without the help of Nintendo. Also I would not use references to rude gestures (such as pointing with the middle digit of a human hand) either.